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Re:8월 3차 독립형 writing assignment (목동김상철토플전문학원 1차 첨삭) 2015.08.29해당카페글 미리보기
chances to get a job than people living in rural areas. // To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that residents living in main cities can take better care of their families than those living in the...
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선생님이 써주셨던 글 영어로 쓰는 거요 2012.04.08해당카페글 미리보기
come people still believe increasing the price of gasoline and electricity is the best idea to save energy, I concretely disagree. To state a specific example, on 1997 in my country, Korea, had a rough time because of economy crisis...
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독립형 다시쓰기2 2012.02.13해당카페글 미리보기
more understanding by enjoying family-oriented diversion. To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that parents can better look after their children in country rather than in the cities in that they are...
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독립형 2012.03.05해당카페글 미리보기
people can relieve stress by watching TV or movies. To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that movies or TV programs have positive impact on bearings of young people. => Over the past a few years, it...
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독립형 2012.02.13해당카페글 미리보기
order to deal with every alterations in international society. To summarize points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that people in today have less gleeful lives than the past in that corrupted environment threatens...
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Re:Re:WT(In the past , it was easier to identify which career or job would secure, successful future.) 2012.05.10해당카페글 미리보기
easier to identify secure and successful job; nevertheless, other people might disagree with it. // However, I concretely believe that it was much easier in the past to recognize which career or job would lead to prosperously stable...
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Re:신수경/If a new product made with trendy skill hits stores..(disagreement)/2차(첨삭 후 수정본 추가) 2013.03.12해당카페글 미리보기
buy it. This clearly shows that it is better to buy a new product when it newly comes out. As shown above, I concretely insist that buying a new trendy item(s) right away is much worth since it gives us benefits of time efficiency, and...
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WT(Today's parents feel much easier to raise children than the parents in the past about 50 years ago) 2012.04.29해당카페글 미리보기
limits. Even though some people will casr doubt on the importance of activities when raising children, however I concretely believe doing activities will make children release stress and cause work efficiencies. A survey was held by KSC...
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Political and Social Opinion 2010.04.02해당카페글 미리보기
say their opinions about political and social issues. To summerize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely think that it is desirable for teachers to keep themselves from expressing their own aspects on social and...
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While the U.S.Talks of War, South Korea Shudders 2017.10.11해당카페글 미리보기
circumstances, South Koreans are struggling to maintain a careful calm and equilibrium is that we feel more concretely than the rest of the world the existence of North Korea, too. Because we naturally distinguish between dictatorships...