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Re:7월 2차 Writing assingment 목동김상철토플전문학원 독립형에세이 1st 첨삭 2015.07.12해당카페글 미리보기
명사로 표현되는 전치사 to이하에 익숙하다 는 표현이다. // To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that due to the lack of technological advancements in the past about a few decades ago, today’s people...
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Re:밑줄그은 내용과 각주를 토대로 최대한 수정해보자! 2014.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
사용/바른 재귀대명사의 사용을 따져가면서 수정해봐라!) To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that people should ask their friends to help to solve their problems, in that asking to friends could make...
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Re:9월1차 독립형 writing assignment (목동김상철토플전문학원 1차 첨삭) 2015.09.11해당카페글 미리보기
due to various ways to keep in touch with one another. // To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that people should not avoid moving to different countries or towns regarding owing to losing friends in...
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#67: It is important for government to protect wild animals and wilderness places for the future generation. 2017.11.25해당카페글 미리보기
is much more important; nevertheless, others might disagree with the statement. [MY OPINION] However, I am concretely convinced that preserving wild animals and wilderness places should be first dealt with by government for the future...
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Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:7월 1st week assignments 독립형 // 에세이 목동김상철토플전문학원 3차 첨삭 2015.07.08해당카페글 미리보기
life has a greater influence on overall happiness than a job. // To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that a social life is much more essential than a job for our happiness in that we can build good...
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Re:RE;RE;RE;RE; Writing 밑줄그은 내용을 토대로 수정해보자 2014.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
and strong pressure about working; nevertheless other people might disagree with the statement. However, I am concretely convinced that working a coworker at company is much better than working alone. Actually I have two specific reasons...
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Re:7월 4차 Writing assignment (목동김상철토플전문학원) 2015.07.31해당카페글 미리보기
growth of cities has a positive impact on environment. // To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that rapid urban growth has a positive impact on society in that urbanization is helpful to expand...
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Re:7월 1st week assignments 독립형 // 에세이 목동김상철토플전문학원 1차 첨삭 2015.07.03해당카페글 미리보기
a greater influence on overall happiness than a job. // To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that social life is much more essential than a job for our happiness in that we can build good...
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Re:Re:In order to conserve energy, government should raise the price of gasoline and electricity. 2017.12.09해당카페글 미리보기
off much money for that energy; nevertheless, others might disagree with the statement. [3: MY OPINION] However, I am concretely convinced that it is not an effective solution in a couple of aspects. [4] Actually, I have several reasons...
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Re:7월 3차 writing assignment (목동김상철토플전문학원 1st 첨삭) 2015.07.20해당카페글 미리보기
systems has a positive impact on cleanliness of air. // To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that people should not pay for using public transportation systems in that free-of-charge public transits...