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Re:8월 2차 독립형 writing assignment (1차 첨삭:목동김상철토플전문학원) 2015.08.20해당카페글 미리보기
has a negative impact on children’s friendship in school. // To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that parents should regulate the time that children spend on watching TV or movies in that watching...
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[독립형라이팅] If a new product made with trendy skill hits stores, .../2차 2013.03.12해당카페글 미리보기
buy it. This clearly shows that it is better to buy a new product when it newly comes out. As shown above, I concretely insist that buying a new trendy item(s) right away is much worth since it gives us benefits of time efficiency, and...
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독립형 에세이 face to face 첨삭 5탄 (TV should be educational) 2013.02.04해당카페글 미리보기
To summarize what I have mentioned above, I concretely believe that television programs should be more educational rather than entertaining because through TV programs people...
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후기 2012.03.24해당카페글 미리보기
has negative impact on children’s friendship in school. To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that parents should make regulation on time that their children spend watching TV or movies in that...
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독립형 다시쓰기 2012.02.21해당카페글 미리보기
financial load so as to encourage their children’s study. To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that parents in the past was able to handle their children more easily than parents in nowadays in that...
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writing독립형 2012.02.16해당카페글 미리보기
to various perspectives by residing in different nations. To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that people migrating to different towns or nations is helpful in that it encourages their comprehension...
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Re:[2차시도] Political and Social Opinion (1차 첨삭+숙제) 2010.04.17해당카페글 미리보기
during teaching students; nevertheless, others might hold their own opinion against it. / In line with this, I concretely opine it could be allowed for teachers to show their personal aspects about political or social issues while...
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독립형 라이팅 2012.07.19해당카페글 미리보기
that the government can solve a number of future problems. To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that the government should offer financial support for scientific investigation in terms of...
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에쎄이 2012.03.21해당카페글 미리보기
allow parents enjoy diverse activities with their children. To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that the cities are better place for parents to look after their kids in that the cities offer better...
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독립형 2012.03.30해당카페글 미리보기
the cities, can enjoy various activities with their children. To summarize the points made in the paragraphs above, I concretely believe that people living in the cities have better situation to raise their children in terms of high...