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Re: Cailliou summary sofia 2024.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
car. Afterward, they went on a picnic. I think this book is fun because I want to go on a picnic. Grade: B Tips: Use Proper Verb Tenses: Ensure verbs are in the correct tense (e.g., "was playing" instead of "playing"). Clarify Phrases...
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Re: Caillou summary Samuel 2024.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
book is very good because I think Caillou is being loved. Grade: B Tips: Combine Sentences for Clarity: Merge shorter sentences to improve flow (e.g., "He likes exploring and has many things to do."). Use Proper Verb Tenses: Ensure verbs...
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Re: Caillou(Rai) 2024.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
They ride rode the shining car and went to picnic on a picnic. Grade: B Tips: Use Correct Verb Tenses: Ensure verbs are in the past tense consistently (e.g., "is cleaning" to "was cleaning," "imagine" to "imagined"). Clarify Actions...
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Re: Caillou (Ellie) 2024.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
Caillou's family went to the beach in the clean car. Grade: B+ Tips: Use Correct Verb Tenses: Ensure verbs are in the past tense consistently (e.g., "suggest" to "suggested," "is sprinkle" to "sprinkled"). Clarify Actions: Make sure...
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Re: Caillou summary (Yulia) 2024.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
dad promised to teach him. And his dad said okey in the car. Grade: B Tips: Combine Sentences for Clarity: Merge shorter sentences to improve flow (e.g., "Caillou loves anything to do with cars, buses, and trucks."). Use Proper Verb...
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Re: Caillou summary Andy 2024.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
a picnic to the beach. This story is funny! Grade: B+ Tips: Correct Name Spelling: Change "Kayoo" to "Caillou...the story. Combine Short Sentences: Merge sentences to improve the flow (e.g., "Caillou loved cars, so he played with his toy...
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Re: Max and Ruby (Alexander) 2024.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
appeared. Max said, "Stay Home!!" Grade: B Tips: Use correct verb tenses: Ensure that verbs are in the correct tense and...Combine sentences for better flow: Merge repetitive sentences to avoid redundancy. Avoid unnecessary repetition...
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Re: Max and Ruby - Ethan 2024.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
met Louise outside. They remained at home decided to stay at home. I think this cartoon is a little bit fun. Grade: B...forms: Ensure that verbs are in the correct tense and form (e.g., "stay at home" instead of "stay in home"). Clarify...
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Re: Max&Ruby 2024.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
think this cartoon is little bit fun a little bit fun. Grade: B Tips: Use correct verb forms: Ensure that verbs are in the correct tense and form (e.g., "messed" to "missed," "catched" to "caught"). Clarify phrases: Ensure each sentence...
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Re: Max&Ruby-Sofia 2024.07.21해당카페글 미리보기
Max answered, “Stay home!" They look so cute. I want to play with them. Grade: B+ Tips: Use correct articles and prepositions: Ensure correct usage of articles and prepositions (e.g., "to Louise's house" instead of "Louise's house...